La Vie Boheme

"Don't Look Back", rewritten

Yes, it's true. I edited today. Mer's latest good news has lit a fire under my ass to get more stories out into circulation.

Clearly, the edit for this story has been influenced by some things I've been reading lately, but I think that's a good thing. I cut a huge portion, and really shifted the focus, I think. In the process, my narrator seems to have gotten a little more psychotic on me. Not that that's a bad thing. Right now, I'm pleased.