La Vie Boheme

Spent most of this evening

Spent most of this evening reworking "Midsummer", ironically, rather than going see A Midsummer Night's Dream on campus. Thanks to some of Brand's suggestions (the less esoteric ones, I think the narrative class he's taking is breaking his brain -- I had to look up some of the words he used in his notes, and I have a huge vocabulary), the beginning is a lot stronger. There's still some weak spots that need polish, though. I think by the end of the month, definitely, it'll be ready or nearly ready to start sending out.