La Vie Boheme

I've hit the point on

I've hit the point on "Girl" where I know where the story's going from here. My favorite place to be. :)

However, I'm frustrated with "Midsummer", still. I think it's well-written crap right about now. I'm going to try Julie's notecard trick: put all of the scenes on notecards and try rearranging them to see if changing the structure will make it more alive. Who knows, maybe I will rewrite it so the whole thing might or might not be just a fantasy born of Michael's midlife crisis. I mean, what better midlife crisis for an aging bookworm? He doesn't run out and chase younger women or buy sports cars, he imagines that he's captured a selkie! Hm. That idea might have some possibilities there...